Lifes Ups and Downs

Life has thrown many curve balls my way and this blog is all about opinions and coping with those changes.

Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Reveiw of Kefayah by A.H. Metwally

This book was written with great purpose, to educate the general public of the United States of America about the people who run this great country. The first hand accounts and comparisons included with the direct quotes definitely add to the authors education on the matters described in this book. One can learn much from Mr. A. H. Metwally.
Before reading KEFAYAH I knew that there were some big problems with the ways the government runs this country. We are supposed to be United and Strong not just in military force but in education, healthcare, peace and caring. As Americans we should show each other respect regardless of race, sex, or religion because these things do not matter. KEFAYAH showed me some more specific instances and examples of the government not adhering to its great constitution. It opened my mind to issues which I was previously unaware of. Metwally is right, there is a serious problem with communication in this country that no one is addressing and could easily be fixed if more people were aware of it or cared about the  issue. I agree with Metwally that we as Americans should not be afraid to be proud of our country and change it for the better. With hard work and determination we as a united people could build ourselves up to the true point of excellence we already see ourselves at in our minds. Together we SHOULD stand.
As far as the actual writing and editing of the book though there were some difficulties for me. Throughout this book there are several grammatical errors which had me rereading sentences and paragraphs causing me to put the book down and the read through to take longer than it would have if a solid read through could have been achieved. The only other thing I kept getting frustrated with is the extensive use of the word WOW throughout the book. The emotions presented to the reader by this word should be achieved through the strength of the statements used rather being demanded from the reader.

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